病句:They have less living areas.
分析:area为可数名词,表示“更少”应该用fewer,less表示“更少”只用于修饰不可数名词。
改正:They have fewer living areas.
病句:I think tiger is beautiful. / Tiger is the king of animals. / The tigers are big and strong.
分析:表示“种类”有三种形式:a+单数名词;the+单数名词;复数名词。
改正:I think the tiger is beautiful. / The tiger is the king of animals. / Tigers are big and strong.
病句:Their food are small animals.
分析:food 为不可数名词。
改正:Their food is small animals.
病句:We should do following actions.
分析:“采取措施”为take action,如果动词为do,则说do something。
改正:We should take the following actions.
病句:The number of tigers is getting smaller and smaller because the loss of their living areas.
分析:because +从句;because of+名词或名词性短语。
改正:The number of tigers is getting smaller and smaller because of the loss of their living areas.
病句:We should write letter to magazines.
分析:letter为可数名词,要加冠词a或用复数形式。
改正:We should write letters to magazines.
病句:There will have no tigers in the world soon.
分析:There be结构中不能出现have。
改正:There will be no tigers in the world soon.
病句:Their fur are beautiful.
分析:fur作为“(动物)皮毛”为不可数名词;作为“皮毛制品”为可数名词。
改正:Their fur is beautiful.
病句:We should build more reserves, don’t buy clothes made of animal fur.
分析:两个句子之间没有连词连接。
改正:We should build more reserves and don’t buy clothes made of animal fur.
病句:Tigers are big and strong. It has bright eyes.
分析:it不能指代复数名词tigers。
改正:Tigers are big and strong. They have bright eyes.
病句:They can run very fast and good at hunting other animals.
分析:good at 前缺少be,and前面没有be,故此处不能省略。
改正:They can run very fast and are good at hunting other animals.
病句:Tigers are usually live alone.
分析:live为动词,前面不能加are。
改正:Tigers usually live alone.
病句:We should take action to encourage people don’t buy things made of tiger fur.
分析:encourage sb not to do sth表示“鼓励/劝说某人不要做某事”。
改正:We should take action to encourage people not to buy things made of tiger fur.
病句:We should tell hunters don’t kill tigers any more.
分析:tell sb not to do sth表示“告诉某人不要做某事”。
改正:We should tell hunters not to kill tigers any more.
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