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试题来源: http://funwithenglish2009.blog.163.com/blog/static/115308079201351703543761/

 

 

病句:Its eyes as big as a plate.

分析:该句缺少动词。

正确:Its eyes are as big as a plate.

 

病句:It’s live in the sea with a lot of wonderful fish.

分析:live为动词,不需要再加is

正确:It lives in the sea with a lot of wonderful fish.

 

病句:They weight about 500 kilograms.

分析:weight为名词“重量”,不能用作谓语。该处应用动词weigh

正确:They weigh about 500 kilograms.

 

病句:It can weighs up to 500 kilograms.

分析:情态动词can后面应跟动词原形。

正确:It can weigh up to 500 kilograms.

 

范文:

A

Dear Chairperson,

I would like to recommend the squid with big eyes for the strangest animal in the world.

       The squid with big eyes gets its name from its huge eyes. Its eyes are as big as a plate! They are the biggest eyes in the world. The squid with big eyes is also very heavy and long. It can weigh about 500 kilograms and grow up to 14 metres. This kind of wonderful squid lives in the sea, so we don’t know much about it. I think it can be the strangest animal in the world.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Ray

By Ji Feng

 

B

Dear Chairperson,

I would like to recommend the squid with big eyes for the strangest animal in the world.

       The squid with big eyes is special and amazing. Its eyes are as big as a plate so they have the biggest eyes in the world. It’s also long and heavy. It weighs about 500 kilograms. It’s about 14 metres long. This strange animal likes to live in the sea. Very few people can see it because it seldom goes out. Isn’t that amazing?

A lot of people in our club think that the squid with big eyes should be the strangest animal in the world. We are looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Luo Yueyue

By Luo Yueyue

 

C

     Yesterday on my way to school, I met Mr Zhou. I was surprised to see that his left leg was badly hurt. He was too weak to go to hospital and he was calling for help. I decided to help him. I came up to him. Then I took him to the hospital. I looked after him for two hours. He was so thankful that he wanted to give me some money. I didn’t accept it. Then I went to school. Of course, I was late, but Mr Zhou needed my help. He was happy and I was happy, too.

By Xiong Tianyu

 

D

     That was a fall. A little girl was on her way home. Suddenly, she found that something happened. She walked and walked. At last she thought she lost her way. A zombie came to her and said, “Please go with me.” The girl was surprised and she cried. The zombie said again, “Don’t be afraid. Go with me, please.” The girl thought for a while and decided to go with her. The zombie suddenly became her mother. “Mother!” the girl cried. They came home together and lived happily for a long time.

By Song Yingying


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