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Fang Ming has many problems. He always gets low marks and feels stressed. He studies very hard. So I advise him to listen to music to make himself relaxed. He has too much homework and can’t stay awake the next day. He always feels weak and tired. I think he should wear green clothes because green can bring strength to him. He has few friends so he always feels lonely. I think he’d better chat with classmates and talk with them in a friendly way. He can share his problems with them, too.

I hope my advice is worth taking. I look forward to his change. (Ye Wenyang)

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He has many problems. He has difficulty getting good marks in exams. He feels stressed. He always stays up late because of too much homework. He has few friends, so he feels lonely sometimes.

I think he can listen to some music to make himself feel relaxed and he can also wear green clothes which can bring him energy. Fang Ming should talk with his classmates a lot and share his joy and sadness with them. He had better make a list of what he should do every day to plan his time better.

I hope my advice is worth taking. (Wang Xiran)

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He has many problems. First, he often gets low marks in exams although he studies hard. So he feels stressed sometimes. Second, he thinks he has too much homework every day and it makes him feel tired. Third, he has no close friends in his school. He often feels lonely.

I think I can give him some suggestions. When he faces big stress, he needs to be relaxed. Why not listen to pop music? He can also wear green more because it may bring energy to him. He needs to try to communicate with his classmates more, too. He can share his worries with them. Moreover, he should plan his study aims carefully and then go over as soon as possible after class.

I hope he can solve his problems and try to be better! (Mao Yue)

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He used to be a good student, but now he has many problems. Now the exams are hard for him and he gets low marks and feels stressed. He also has too much homework and it makes him stay up late at night and feels tired and weak the next day. Moreover, he has few friends, so when he has problems, he wonders who he can ask for advice. He feels lonely.

I told him to relax himself by listening to music because music can make people relax. He can also wear green clothes as green represents energy. He should also try his best to communicate with his classmates and then he can share worries with them. I asked him to manage his time better and go to bed earlier.

I hope he will get better soon. (Ji Feng)

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